Sujata felt excited, Amit was returning from his business trip today. She fussed about in the kitchen, a place she seldom visited. Her recent visits to her village had reminded her of all the delicious stuff that her grandmother used to cook up with simple vegetables and she had decided she would make some of that for Amit.
His trip this time had been exceptionally long. Almost a month and she imagined that he would be craving simple home cooked food. She checked her watch yet again….she needed to hurry to be able to take a bath before he came.
Sujata often wondered about her relationship with Amit. Her own feelings puzzled her. The only two occasions she could remember when Amit had held her really close were during her labor pains and two months back when they had both rushed to Mussourie on being informed that Deeksha was being followed by an unknown man.
That was also something she was curious to know about. Amit had been receiving regular updates from the detective agency that had been hired to find the man and ensure Deeksha’s safety. He had not passed on all the details to her. Since he was away she had not pressed for details however now that he would be back she could ask for more information.
The familiar black gates opening to allow the car entry reminded Amit once again of a cave, his own den which protected him from all that happened in the outside world. His mind went over the past month and he couldn’t believe that he had actually stayed on hunting for a young man, whose name also he wasn’t sure of.
What madness had gripped him! The boy’s behavior had infuriated him, puzzled him and at last made him feel humbled. He was not used to charity and that’s what the boy had done towards him. He couldn’t come away without repaying the gesture in some manner. So he tried his best to find the boy. But try as he might he couldn’t find the boy. He had gone back to that pub every evening for a week but the boy never showed up again. He was afraid to ask after him, it would raise too many eyebrows. And there was the bigger question of who to ask after; he didn’t even have a name to start on.
Only the mails from the detective agency had the power to drag him back home otherwise for how long he would have continued on that hopeless pursuit even he wasn’t aware. The mails mentioned that the stalker was back after having disappeared for almost ten days.
Through all his passions and problems Deeksha remained one string that could pull him back. He still remembered the first moment when the nurse had taken him to see her. She had her eyes closed tightly and she seemed to be sleeping. A little red bundle with a very brave face. As he stood looking she had opened her eyes and smiled. He had fallen in love and that love helped him tide over the most turbulent and sad moments of his life, always.
Us
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Aeons ago we met
and held hands
ages passed between
one glimpse and another
it took upheavals
to bring us together
Lores got written,
weapons clashed...
1 week ago

23 comments:
This is so true - it is often the love for the offspring that cements a couple together, at least in our parents' generation. And you have such a subtle way with words.
Dear Sucharita,
thank you so much....yes love for children but then i look around and see what those very children do to their parents and i really feel it would be much better to live your life for yourself first and foremost.
Oh well written.Children that bond parents and enable them grow various stages in life.
Pinku
this is a very nice story and I wish that the flow shall continue. Well! I am also like that but i also came back after a long gap and now the condition is such that my blogs may also be continuous.
thanks for writting pinku..its always a pleasure to read u.
now there are too many open threads - sunaina, inder, the man following deeksha and now this youg boy (though i feel that the young buy wont feature again)
write more often girl!!
Very nice as always. :) Keep writing.
Going good. The story needs speed now.
Thoda jaldi jaldi post karein jnaab.
I love the way you describe the father's love for his child... and i adore 'a little red bundle with a very brave face' :) So descriptive and true :) The beauty of your words is the sheer simplicity and warmth...no ornaments, no facades...quietly making its presence felt.
Keep dreaming :)
As an aside, in answer to your comment on my blog...
Maybe i'll take u to Israel some day (if u are willing, of course). I want to go there too.
So let's make it a date someday :)
nsiyer ...thanks
Pradip - am now looking forward to checking out ur blog.
Iya - promise I will try to speed up...
Jagjit, Mampi thanks for the appreciation
Mixed Brew: its nice to see your comment. Thanks for the kind words.
The offer to go to Israel sounds wonderful!!! lets plan something...
Inshallah! (like they say in this part of the world). I'll keep you posted, coz i'll be pestering some travel mates 4 details :)
WHAT???!!??? U r 28th Apr. born??!!??? u r kidding me!!
So am I!!! U r my cosmic sis!!
I'm so psyched, I'm lost for words...
U know what mixed brew...I had a feeling it would be so...was merely checking. :)
Sounds good having a cosmic sis....especially one that lives abroad...kind of ensures good supply of chocolates and other goodies ;)
lets meet up sometime soon..
That...is a promise :) Along with the chocolates :)
Now I am going to start counting days...MB, and am not very patient u know...
:)
LOL! hopefully, it'll be sooner than later :)
Pinku
What about your next blog? Please do not keep us waiting.
great writing pinku. loved opening up as well. will keep coming back for sure.
Awwww....you aren't telling any more stories here as well :( Your blogs make me feel at peace and I come to them often...to smile, to sigh, to feel good. Strangely, I feel empty when i enter and don't find you there.
Pradip...soon very soon..I promise
Agent green glass....am delighted to have you here. will look forward to more visits from you.
MB: will post soon...hang on girl!
Pinku, I'm so sorry for your loss. I feel guilty now...my non-existent problems seem so insignificant in the light of your loss.
I hope you heal soon.
I'll definitely give you a buzz when i come down. And that Israel trip will happen someday...money or no money!
Take care.
MB...all pain is pain...none too small or too big.
Are u online? we could chat...
my id is mitra.priyanka@gmail.com
Very Nice pinku!
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